My indignation


 It gives me a lot of rage and grief think like do theat try to women and girls. Historically we have been mistreated, reified and inferiorized just because we are not a man. Women are verbally battered, physically assaulted and even raped, all of this is naturalized in Sexist speeches.

 Sometimes they call the exaggerated feminists, but how will they not do it if women are abused daily? I think it is very important and necessary to make this visible when, at day June 23, 2017, 23 completed femicides and 48 frustrated femicides are registered in Chile.

 It is not normal for women to live in fear and to get used to the fact that when they leave their homes, they do not know if they will return well. Supposedly we live in an egalitarian state, but in reality that does not happen, and it is very easy to notice this difference, ie, women are paid less than a man, despite having the same capabilities.


But it seems that for Sebastián Piñera these figures and cases are not very clear. "The women are thrown to the ground and they become dead, and all of us throw ourselves on top and become the living," said the former Chilean president and now presidential candidate in an act of his political campaign.

 Their response was that they were using their sayings for political gainand that was just a joke. It bothers me because the machismo is an important issue because it kills.

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  1. Prof. Masías3 de julio de 2017 a las 0:26

    Congratulations, this text shows your progress. It has a wider and more accurate use of grammar and lexical resources, thus, making better use of cohesive devices, however, I still do not know who you call "they" and in this regard the text is not fully coherent.

    Corrections:
    grief think like do theat= check coherence
    they call the exaggerated feminists= who do they call? who are "they"?

    T:2, L:2, G: 2= 6 pts.
    Grade: 4,7

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